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Thank you for correcting my odd edit. But [http://touhou.wikia.com/index.php?title=Patchouli_Knowledge&curid=1268&diff=55727&oldid=55726 My last edit] was reverted to confirm that the rumored thing isn't the fact. That sentence says "Patchouli has been rumored". This means that the rumored thing seems true but less-founded, & that there is some possibility. But EoSD was released on August in '02 and Negima started on February in '03. So I think there should be some sentence saying so. What do you think about my suggest? And you wroted down "odd wording", then what is a proper wording for example? Please tell me, my editing ability isn't very good & needs more improvement.
Thank you for correcting my odd edit. But [http://touhou.wikia.com/index.php?title=Patchouli_Knowledge&curid=1268&diff=55727&oldid=55726 My last edit] was reverted to confirm that the rumored thing isn't the fact. That sentence says "Patchouli has been rumored". This means that the rumored thing seems true but less-founded, & that there is some possibility. But EoSD was released on August in '02 and Negima started on February in '03. So I think there should be some sentence saying so. What do you think about my suggest? And you wroted down "odd wording", then what is a proper wording for example? Please tell me, my editing ability isn't very good & needs more improvement.
:: The only thing odd about it was the use of 'although', which is used to join conflicting phrases. Here we have
::A) Yue is rumored to be modeled after Patchouli.<br>
::and<br>
::B) EoSD was released before Negima.<br>
::There is no conflict between these statements, so the use of although seems weird.  [[User:TOUHOU-Tyle|TOUHOU-Tyle]] 18:43, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Revision as of 18:43, 15 December 2008

Thank you, Touhou-Tyle. You've make some my awkward edits fixed & better. I'm happy to see your fine editing. Owing to your workings, this wiki has been getting nearer to the legacy of culture, I think. Please edit & fix articles on your pace, & go with other people & me. Again, thank you for your editing! --Masuo64 22:17, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

No problems. That's the nice thing about a wiki, that everyone can cooperate to improve the articles. TOUHOU-Tyle 06:52, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

About Patchouli's article

Thank you for correcting my odd edit. But My last edit was reverted to confirm that the rumored thing isn't the fact. That sentence says "Patchouli has been rumored". This means that the rumored thing seems true but less-founded, & that there is some possibility. But EoSD was released on August in '02 and Negima started on February in '03. So I think there should be some sentence saying so. What do you think about my suggest? And you wroted down "odd wording", then what is a proper wording for example? Please tell me, my editing ability isn't very good & needs more improvement.

The only thing odd about it was the use of 'although', which is used to join conflicting phrases. Here we have
A) Yue is rumored to be modeled after Patchouli.
and
B) EoSD was released before Negima.
There is no conflict between these statements, so the use of although seems weird. TOUHOU-Tyle 18:43, 15 December 2008 (UTC)