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• 08:14, 1 November 2021 (diff | hist) (-1)‎ Urban Legend in Limbo/Story/Koishi's Script ‎ (I'm not sure why you'd *not* translate that as taste. That said "Blood Pond of Hell" seems to be a thing both in reality and in myth? You can actually visit a pond called that in Japan.) (Tags: Mobile edit, Mobile web edit)
• 07:49, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+6)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (current)
• 07:48, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+26)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (The space between the two thoughts here, as well as no notable connection, implies they're not connected/she's not comparing them.)
• 07:23, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+7)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎
• 07:21, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (-10)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎
• 07:19, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (-3)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎
• 07:17, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+6)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎
• 07:14, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+66)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (To retain the specificity of this referring to a flower, and to keep metre and rhyme, I think this might be a good take)
• 06:53, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (-4)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎
• 06:52, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+222)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (Edit in an attempt to retain metre and rhyming schemes, as well as fixing verse 3. Considering she refers to drinking up a world in verse 2, I believe verse 3 is referring to that, not to life itself)
• 05:51, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (-5)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (The word used for the sound is simply not powerful. 軋む refers to old, creaking things)
• 05:46, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (-3)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (given this is definitely a song from Suika's perspective I think the choice of 強く強く強く強く should consistently be kept as "be strong, strong, strong, strong!" It's what oni are all about.)
• 05:39, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+20)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (Being a little poetic in tl, but 届け is like send it, tell it, deliver it to. It's certainly not "reach out" and it does seem to be talking about her having drank a dream which was a phantasm/not real)
• 05:33, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+10)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (I thought the tl was correct but too literal,)
• 05:29, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (-8)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ ("running bubbly foam" is clunky; + it mentions drinking the night away (and this is after the first verse and the chorus being about letting go and partying) so I think this is about alcohol. Also it probably is referring to her waking up, not dawn itself)
• 05:23, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (-9)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ ("Gathered" because of how Suika's abilities are usually translated, and given that and the perspective of "forget the past, ignore the future" I think 終わらない今に喝采 means "cheering for the endless 'now'" basically. Given that, and grammar)
• 05:15, 27 September 2021 (diff | hist) (+14)‎ m Lyrics: 祭炎 ‎ (I'm going to adjust parts of this that seem off or liberal, starting with this. The grammar with the 乗せて lyric is certainly weird, but given the context of the song it probably means "How about letting this party take you for a ride?")
• 23:05, 20 August 2021 (diff | hist) (-4)‎ m Eirin Yagokoro ‎
• 23:00, 20 August 2021 (diff | hist) (+107)‎ Eirin Yagokoro ‎ (Her specific response is: まだ、死にたくは無いわ。 　　　　それに私は、姫の能力で作られた薬を服用している。"Honestly, I don't want to die yet. And besides, I've taken the medicine made with the Princess's power.")
• 05:41, 29 July 2021 (diff | hist) (+263)‎ Cirno ‎ (Feel free to remove the speculation; the basic info is confirmed. I'd cite the page myself but to be honest, I don't know how to. Page is /Strange_Creators_of_Outer_World/Who's_Who_of_Humans_%26_Youkai_in_Gensokyo/Tanned_Cirno)
• 17:04, 26 July 2021 (diff | hist) (+3)‎ Double Spoiler/Spell Cards/Level EX ‎ (貧乏臭 just doesn't mean empty. Used a better fitting word) (current)
• 05:32, 15 June 2021 (diff | hist) (-126)‎ m Imperishable Night/Story/Netherworld Team's Scenario ‎ (Removed the odd note about Youmu not being aware or such. I'm not sure what you mean about her not knowing, especially as later in the game she is unfazed by Yuyuko saying they're stopping the night. She knows.) (current)
• 00:27, 28 April 2021 (diff | hist) (0)‎ m Scarlet Weather Rhapsody/Story/Tenshi's Scenario ‎ (I know she usually says mukyuu, but it's actually mugyuu here) (current)
• 18:05, 15 April 2021 (diff | hist) (-35)‎ Canon ‎ (Alright so this is specifically in volume 2, chapter 10 of OSP. 17th page of the chapter, it's explicit. While SoPM reveals that Marisa went to the Underworld the page linked before debunks her resolving the incident. She doesn't know who caused it, even)
• 14:02, 29 March 2021 (diff | hist) (0)‎ m Interview on Creative Train ‎ (Small thing. He did apologize in this segment and this initial tl struck me as a little too short/rude for what he said) (current)
• 04:39, 30 January 2021 (diff | hist) (-4)‎ m Satori Komeiji ‎ (title)
• 04:38, 30 January 2021 (diff | hist) (+203)‎ m Talk:Foul Detective Satori ‎ (reply) (current)
• 20:10, 27 January 2021 (diff | hist) (+54)‎ Talk:Foul Detective Satori ‎
• 20:00, 27 January 2021 (diff | hist) (-2)‎ m User:Swifft ‎ (current)
• 20:00, 27 January 2021 (diff | hist) (+2)‎ m User:Swifft ‎
• 19:59, 27 January 2021 (diff | hist) (+24)‎ Talk:Foul Detective Satori ‎
• 19:58, 27 January 2021 (diff | hist) (+880)‎ N Talk:Foul Detective Satori ‎ (Created page with "==Foul is inaccurate== https://ejje.weblio.jp/content/%E5%8F%8D%E5%89%87 For the record it's literally correct, and in English a "foul" does apply as a word that does mean wha...")
• 19:48, 27 January 2021 (diff | hist) (0)‎ Foul Detective Satori ‎ (It looks like the Touhou Wiki has overall "chosen" Foul but again I'd urge you to look up what 反則 means. Foul in English immediately implies things much worse than what is implied with Japanese, but I am not about to go fixing the whole site myself)
• 19:44, 27 January 2021 (diff | hist) (+20)‎ Foul Detective Satori ‎ ("Foul" is technically correct; even in English foul = foul play, but in Japanese it's just for rule breaking. The word in English should do the same. Doesn't need to be THIS word; decide based on translations IE weblio: 反則)
• 23:59, 2 November 2020 (diff | hist) (0)‎ m Hakurei God ‎
• 23:59, 2 November 2020 (diff | hist) (+107)‎ Hakurei God ‎ (I went back through to get the Reimu B ending. The raw and translation don't have any implication that the God's anger is driving away visitors. On the contrary, Byakuren says that the god is angry because it isn't being worshiped, and makes a suggestion.)
• 20:47, 18 October 2020 (diff | hist) (-13)‎ m Dragon (God) ‎
• 20:45, 18 October 2020 (diff | hist) (+1)‎ m Dragon (God) ‎
• 20:42, 18 October 2020 (diff | hist) (+2)‎ m Sages of Gensokyo ‎ (Minor edit based on the likelihood that the Dragon God is a singular creature due to several depictions as 1 being in canon and common interpretation as 1 being in fandom. See: dragon pages histories for sources) (current)
• 12:27, 16 September 2020 (diff | hist) (-54)‎ Dragon (God) ‎ (This page is not misleading. In at least 3 pieces of official art (Sangetsusei) it's shown to be a single dragon, the statue is of 1 dragon, and this is no English-only "misconception". See: http://blog.livedoor.jp/coleblog/archives/51904618.html)
• 11:43, 16 September 2020 (diff | hist) (-5)‎ Curiosities of Lotus Asia/Chapter 19 ‎ (http://blog.livedoor.jp/coleblog/archives/51904618.html Can be read as plural, but common perception is the dragon god is 1 god. Further the statue in the human village is of one god. If it's multiple, there actually isn't any definite indication of such)
• 11:42, 16 September 2020 (diff | hist) (-7)‎ Perfect Memento in Strict Sense/Dragon ‎ (http://blog.livedoor.jp/coleblog/archives/51904618.html See dragon page. Sure, yes, Akyuu's format but: (1) dragon statue, & JP fans also seem to consider this ONE being. Maybe ask ZUN for clarification (not a joke). No explicit plural/1 statue = hold on)
• 11:41, 16 September 2020 (diff | hist) (+58)‎ Dragon (species) ‎ (http://blog.livedoor.jp/coleblog/archives/51904618.html Not a Western-only idea *Sangetsusei: 1 dragon *JP fanart: 1 dragon *JP wikis: 1 *Statue is of 1 *THE dragon was last seen long ago *JP text doesn't use plural form to refer to godS)
• 02:28, 29 October 2019 (diff | hist) (+29)‎ m Strange Creators of Outer World/Introduction of Previous Works/Phantasmagoria of Flower View/Award-Giving Review ‎ (Change from "respectable" in Marisa's description of Reisen. The term is more like "a weird person" or "a person who does not have a solid character to them" in Japanese) (current)
• 12:56, 25 October 2019 (diff | hist) (+5)‎ m Symposium of Post-mysticism/Kyouko Kasodani ‎ (The Japanese here is very casual and boisterous, translation edited to better reflect that (was previously rather low-key)) (Tags: Mobile edit, Mobile web edit)
• 22:37, 18 July 2019 (diff | hist) (+1)‎ User:Swifft ‎ (Tags: Mobile edit, Mobile web edit)
• 22:37, 18 July 2019 (diff | hist) (-1)‎ User:Swifft ‎ (Tags: Mobile edit, Mobile web edit)
• 22:27, 18 July 2019 (diff | hist) (+19)‎ Immaterial and Missing Power/Story/Yuyuko's Scenario ‎ (This is more accurate. 子供扱い means treating an adult as a child, also they're two sentences.) (Tags: Mobile edit, Mobile web edit)
• 22:53, 16 July 2019 (diff | hist) (+23)‎ Kasen Ibaraki ‎ (possibly more accurate translation, see: character titles page for note/explanation) (Tags: Mobile edit, Mobile web edit)
• 22:21, 16 July 2019 (diff | hist) (-15)‎ m Characters/Titles ‎ (idiomatic expression -> idiom) (Tags: Mobile edit, Mobile web edit)

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