Talk:Embodiment of Scarlet Devil/Story/Extra Story
These are the changes that I have made in EoSD prologue. If anybody finds the original way more appropriate, please let me know.
- I definitely don't want to do that. ---> I definitely won't leave you to do that.
- It's probably not fine, so you should just go back now ---> It's probably not fine, hurry up and go back immediately.
I change this so that the latter reflects Reimu's tone more accurately in terms of being annoyed with Remilia's presence.
- A sudden shower? ---> An evening squall.
- the sky was unnaturally clear. ---> the sky was clearly unnatural.