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Talk:Urban Legend in Limbo/Story/Koishi's Scenario

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revisions

I've revised the translation. Most if it is polish and rephrasing, but there were some retranslations as well, though mostly minor.

a brief list of edits:

  • Changed all instances "Mary" to "Miss Mary". Will overlook this the rest of the translation as well.
  • Tried to add more oomph and emphasis to Koishi's lines that reenact the lines from her Urban Legend.
  • Retranslated some of the stage titles to make them snappier.
  • A lot of rephrasing in the Sumireko and Kasen exchanges.
  • Koishi's line "ねえ電話に出てよう" was mistranslated. In general there were some issues with 電話 being translated as "phone" instead of "phone call", which is reasonable since 電話 can mean either of those things, depending on the context.
  • Sumireko's line "一旦帰って準備してこよう" was mistranslated.
  • I want to mention that in my translation, Koishi's line "you may get frightened!" the may means "you may please", rather than "you might". This is to reflect the somewhat unusual phrasing of her Japanese line.

Please check the page history for all edits. I feel like I spent a lot time correct (my own) typos. --Huppa (talk) 01:19, 4 August 2016 (UTC)